Which Color Rose Do You Wear Today?

Posted by Toni V.S. | 11:27 PM | 7 comments »



I suppose I was nearly seven before I realized that Southerners were different, that they had customs and ceremonies which might seem unusual to the rest of the nation...such as the Mother's Day roses....

    In the town I where I lived, we celebrated Mother's Day the way everyone else in town did:  getting up on Sunday morning and having a big breakfast, then presenting Mama with her cards and gifts--some asked for, some unexpected, but all greeted with enthusiasm and appreciation. 

    Afterward, we would dress for church, in still-new Easter clothes, so lovingly sewn by hand and worn only a few Sundays previously.  Soon we were all ready to go, Mama looking beautiful in a dress of her own making and my father--handsome in his navy suit with the thin white pinstripes and a burgundy tie.  At that point, Mama would  say, "Just a moment, we have to have our roses!" and she would take her shears from the kitchen drawer and  disappear down the back steps into her garden.

    Mama had an authentic Green Thumb.  Flowers of every conceivable type and color flourished in her garden, camellias, azaleas, vines of wisteria dangling their purple flowers grape-like from the fence, golden forsythia, pink oxalis, and silver dusty miller--and roses--bushes, runners, florabundas, hybrid teas--everywhere.  As I watched, she selected two red blossoms, half-opened and still damp with Easter-morning dew, clipped them, and stood there a moment, looking around hurriedly, before returning to where we waited.
 

     One rose became a boutonniere, while the other was pinned to the left breast of my dress.  Then, she said, almost forlornly, "The white roses haven't bloomed yet.  What will I do?"

    "Surely there's some other white flower," my father suggested.  After all, there was no law that said she had to wear a white rose, and as she returned to the garden, searching among the plants and shrubs, I wondered aloud the thought I had always accepted until now:
    "What's so special about wearing roses on Mother's Day?"

  




 My  father smiled, as if he'd been expecting this and wondered why it had taken me so long. 

    "They're to honor our mothers," he explained.  "If you wear a red rose, it means your mother is still alive, if you wear a white one, then--she's not."  

    I thought about that a moment.  It made sense.   My father's mother was still living--we saw her all the time, but I knew my mother's mother only from old photographs. She’d died the day after Christmas, in 1933.  Most of the people at church who wore white roses were older people.  Of course, their mothers wouldn't be alive, but I had seen one or two children wearing white flowers. 

    In a few moment, Mama was back, all smiles, returning the scissors to the drawer and pinning a spray of white English dogwood, with its sweet, sweet fragrance, like a corsage on her shoulder.  Taking my hand and my father's arm, she went down the steps toward the car.

    Many Mother's Days have passed since then.  I became a mother myself and we moved to Nebraska, and when my son was small, I kept the traditions I had grown up with alive--a die-hard Southerner in the midst of the Great Plains.  Each Easter, we had a frantic search for a red flower for him to wear, while I--well, I looked for a white one.





    My son doesn’t follow that custom now.  He doesn’t search frantically for a red rose and I doubt if he’ll worry much about finding a white one...whenever.

    Nevertheless, every year, I remember...the day I learned the symbol of the Mother's Day roses and what having a mother really means.  I wonder if he ever will?

    Too bad I won’t be around to tell him.



 Welcome, Allison Brennan. I hear you have been working hard.  Please tell us what we can expect soon. 

I’m developing a workshop about writing thrillers and romantic suspense, and presented it once on line and once in person. I’ll be presenting it again at the RWA conference in Anaheim, and need to work through some bugs – namely, I needed more time!

So as I was going through my notes to figure out how to condense the workshop into a simple ten-point outline, I found this tidbit:

Years ago, I interviewed Linda McFall, former senior editor with MIRA, for something (I honestly can’t remember what!) and she told me once that what makes her want to acquire a book is 1) a great character she can root for and 2) perfect pacing. Likewise, she said, she can fix anything except character and pacing.

“Perfect pacing” doesn’t really say anything, does it? Fast, slow, it doesn’t matter—what matters is that the pacing is perfect for that story.

There are other editors who probably have other deal breakers and can fix pacing with their magic wand, but to me Linda nailed it about what makes me love a book – or a television show.

According to the Tennessee Screenwriting Association [LINK: http://www.tennscreen.com/thriller.htm], one of the pillars of a great thriller is tension:

“Tension must be maintained throughout the story through the conflicts (keeping it difficult for the hero to get what he/she wants) and through the writer's style and story pacing.”

Tension is, essentially, perfect pacing. It’s giving the reader enough conflict and information to keep them turning pages but not so much that they go into overload and hyperventilate!

If the hero gets what they want at the beginning of the book, there is no book – unless getting what they want sets up a chain of events where getting what they want makes their ULTIMATE goal unattainable (i.e. Monkey’s Paw syndrome, as well as subtext in dystopian literature, Star Trek storylines—perfect society with dark undertones, etc.) So then there really are two levels of goals and attaining one creates deeper, richer conflict.

What the hero wants can change over the course of the story. In THE PREY, my debut novel, the hero was a hired bodyguard. His goal was to keep the heroine safe while the police hunted down her stalker. When the killer goes after someone close to the hero, his goal changes to revenge—he now has a personal stake in finding the killer.

Tension means the reader does not know what will happen, or they think they know and it’s all bad for the characters they care about! Tension is largely psychological--something may or may not happen, depending on both things we know and things we don’t. Sort of like in 1980s horror movies, where you KNOW the teenagers are all going to be killed (or most of them) but you don’t know WHEN. So every time they walk on scene, you feel tense. Then when they survive three times, you feel relieved, then WHAM! They get beheaded and you scream. J … Tension is not necessarily action. When Donald Maass says “tension on every page” this doesn’t mean a constant state of action and reaction, just that the reader needs to be tense for the survival (real or emotional) of the characters they root for.

Have you seen THE AVENGERS yet? If not, what are you waiting for? One of the best movies of the decade, pitch perfect in every way from character to pacing to dialogue. Obviously, I’m not surprised – it’s Joss Whedon plus superheroes.

What I loved about this movie from a creative view was not just the special effects or the clear but complex plot, but how each scene built on the previous scenes, so that there was a constant state of tension without being overloaded in every scene. It was fluid and flawless and I can’t wait to go back so I can dissect it rather than simply enjoy it. You can learn a lot about pacing and tension from the movies!

But pacing isn’t just important in thrillers. It’s equally important in romantic comedies, for example. One of my favorite romantic comedies is WORKING GIRL with Harrison Ford and Melanie Griffith. Like THE AVENGERS, each scene builds on the previous scenes, so that you have a layered, textured, and flawless storyline. It doesn’t have superheroes or chases or explosions, but it has constant tension – is Melanie Griffith going to achieve her dreams, retain her integrity, and keep her man in the cutthroat business world?

In the world of television, crime shows usually focus on pacing because it’s critical to the genre. But comedies like NEW GIRL need pitch perfect pacing—it’s harder often because comedy is subjective, and you need to set up and tell the joke and immediately move on. No explanation to the audience. Great learning tools!

What movie or show have you seen recently where you were wowed by the way the story was told? I guarantee, it’s all in the pacing.


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Patricia Mason in Deep Shitake.

Posted by Mary Marvella | 11:38 PM | 9 comments »


Please help me welcome Patricia Mason!  Good Tuesday morning Patrica! I am dying to learn about your book title. A little birdie told me you have one of those stories we shake our heads and say couldn't happen in real life. 

The day I found myself IN DEEP SHITAKE, by Patricia Mason

Are the aliens conducting experiments? Do they have their own version of funniest home videos?  Or maybe God has a really good sense of humor.  I'm not sure what the cosmic explanation is for some of the ridiculous situations I get myself into.  But I'm a big believer in turning lemons into lemonade and sh....tuff into shinola. So.............

What did I do after being stuck in a car window with my posterior embarrassingly exposed to the cold, winter wind? Used it for inspiration in my writing, of course.  Well, that is what I did AFTER I extracted myself from the window, all the while praying my neighbors didn't have a video camera....or it they did, that it was broken, or....Anyway, you get the idea.

A few years ago, I was traveling a long distance by car with my two dogs and was trapped in a sudden whiteout. My car spun 360 degrees on the highway and came to rest off the road in a snow bank. I was towed out but by the time I got home a few hours later, the doors of the car were frozen and I couldn't get them open to get out. By then the dogs were desperate for a bathroom (or fire hydrant) break. I was able to get my window down to about the half-way point. But I was forced to try to crawl out.

Since I was dressed for comfort in a skirt with slouchy socks with clogs, by the time I got halfway out the window, the socks and shoes had come off and my skirt was up around my waist.

I used this incident, in a fictionalized way, in my new romantic suspense, IN DEEP SHITAKE. My heroine is trying to break into the car instead of out when she becomes stuck in a humiliating position. The hunky hero just happens to come along and find her.

I'm not sure if I would have been happier if my own embarrassing incident had ended with a sexy Brit rescuing me from my predicament. Instead, I finally managed to fall out and land in the snow. If a sexy man had found me stuck, I probably would never have been able to emerge from my house ever, ever, ever, again dying from the humiliation. However, having a guy like the sexy Ross from my book might have made the shame worthwhile.

Here's the overview of my story:

Take one devastatingly handsome movie star.
Add in one outrageously sexy female private eye with a penchant for food-word obscenities.
Mix in a dose of mistaken identity and a handful of Russian mobsters.
And they're all In Deep Shitake.


In Deep Shitake is FREE May 7-9th as part of the Spring Fling Free Par-Tay. Dozens of other books (Romances from sweet to HOT. Thrillers, Mysteries, Horror and more. Fantastic books, many by award-winning and best-selling authors.) Readers can find all the free books at www.freepartay.com.  I hope you'll all come and party with us at the Par-Tay!

In fact, the heroine of In Deep Shitake is also featured in another Free Par-Tay FREE book, A Thriller Anthology called Bullets, Brass and Babes. http://www.amazon.com/Bullets-Brass-Babes-Anthology-ebook/dp/B007V69ZKC/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1334852428&sr=8-1
Look for the story IT KEEPS GETTING SHITAKIER.

 ADD THIS TO JOANNE'S BARGAINS FOR YESTERDAY!!




Posted by Josie | 1:50 PM | 4 comments »

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News, Novels & Margaritas

Posted by Autumn Jordon | 12:16 AM | 11 comments »

The US NEWS Industry has had no problem filling their pages, slots or air time over the past weeks. Mother nature has been both horrid and beautiful. The boys of summer are back, while the Stanley Cup is up for grabs. Also, the tall guys are still running the basketball courts. And, let's not forgot today is Ketucky Derby too. I can't wait to see all the ladies in their derby hats. Golf, Nascar, etc. etc.


Out of the headlines, tragic stories will emerge, and so will stories of triumph. Ones which will bring joy to our hearts and cause tears to fall to our cheeks. People need to hear the success stories in order to restore their hope and faith and give them the courage to put one foot in front of the other. They long to hear them.

These headlines become fuel for authors to tell stories. Am I right, PFS sisters?

I know I get ideas for stories from the news. I only need one bit to catch my attention and my imagination is off. However, as a romance writer, my stories will always have a Happily Ever After. I wonder if the media should take a look at romance books sales for guidance in their reporting. While I know it is important to report the tragic developments for a score of reasons, I think the news should end on a happy note.

With that off my chest this morning, I’m going to plan to celebrate the day by helping my very pregnant DIL do some cleaning, plant some flowers, play with my dog, and then this afternoon continue to write a love story with a happy ending.

Oh yeah, since it’s Cinco de Mayo, I’ll mix up a batch of Margaritas and enjoy.

Have a wonderful weekend!


www.autumnjordon.com

Riding the Union Pacific

Posted by Toni V.S. | 11:44 PM | 10 comments »




There’s always that scene in the Western, where the train pulls into the little depot.  Steam billows up with loud hisses as the engineer pulls back on the brake.  The conductor from the Way Car, guides passengers to the exits where they climb down the stairs and hurry off to be greeted by loved ones.  Perhaps the Marshal or the sheriff is waiting for someone, expecting a newly-released badman returning to town to even an old score, or he’s meeting that mail-order bride he finally got up enough money and gumption to bring to town.  Later, the train, on its way again, may be robbed by highwaymen.  There’s always one reckless thief who rides alongside the train and grabs the handle of a box car’s half-open door, allowing himself to be pulled from the saddle and swinging inside the train, where he makes his way to the car where the payroll safe is located.  Or—a little safer—the robbers merely break up the tracks and remove the railroad ties and the train chugs to a standstill because it had nowhere to go.  And who can forget the runaway train, whistle blaring as it plows through town before running off the trestle and plummeting into the river hundreds of feet below?


Anyone who’s seen a Western movie, an episode of Gunsmoke, or the Season One of Hell on Wheels knows exactly what I’m talking about. 

 

 In my current WIP, tentatively titled The Lily and the Shamrock, my heroine is sent a ticket to Nebraska by her brother.  Chafing under his guardian’s tyranny, New Orleans scion Philippe DuVal has run away from home.  He promises his sister, Angelique, he’ll send for her as soon as he finds work, though Philippe, as a rich man’s son, has no manual training whatsoever. He has the optimism of the young, though, and has been at odds with his uncle for some time, so rebellion sets in.  While Philip slaves away on a ranch just outside Lincoln, in the meantime, Uncle Claud fritters away Philippe’s inheritance at Seamus Brady’s gambling hall.  When Seamus calls in his markers, Claud, knowing the gambler wants to get a foothold in New Orleans society, to become “respectable,” offers marriage to Angelique if he’ll cancel his debts.  Angelique, of course, wants nothing to do with the uncouth Brady whose activities border on the criminal but she’s completely helpless without her brother to protect her, since Claude is her guardian, also.  Philippe’s ticket to Nebraska arrives just in time.  Now, all Angelique has to do is find a way to get to the station before Uncle Claud and Brady can stop her.

 At the Durham Museum in Omaha, Union Pacific is well-represented.  Not only was the Museum once the Union Station for seven railroads, among them the UP, but in its basement, it houses a complete train, from Way Car (what we civilians call a caboose) to the Engine.  Tourists can climb into the cars and go through them.

So let’s buy our ticket and climb aboard.

First, the ticket: A book of tickets, rather…  About four by five inches, the bright blue center design says quite plainly “Train Ticket.”  Surrounding that in a decorative border are, at the top, the months of the year and beside them the days of the month and the year as well as the direction the train would be traveling…East or West.  Below, at the bottom are the names of cities, St. Louis, Omaha… There’s a serial number, a book and ticket number.  The book has instructions on how the ticket has to be punched before being removed from the book and which half was to be given to the passenger.  There are also more important admonitions:  No excess fare to be collected.  Ticket non-redeemable.  Fare is paid for Continuous Passage to Destination on Designated Train for Designated City as specified and for no Other.

Inside the passenger car:

The first thing one notices is how small the seating is.  There were two rows of seats, 24 seats in each row, in pairs facing each other, with a window, but the entire seat is barely four feet long, though nicely upholstered.  These were the “plain” passenger cars.  The Pullman car or “sleeping” car, had three separate sleeping arrangements.  The first was a fixed platform located above the seats.  Passengers utilizing these undressed in a central bathroom, walked back to their berth, and climbed into it via a portable ladder.  The bed was about six feet long and five feet wide, with only about two feet clearing head-space.
In my novel, Philippe doesn’t have enough money to buy his sister a sleeping berth, so poor Angelique has to sleep sitting up the entire trip!




The second type of accommodation was a “single” sleeping arrangement.  An enclosed seat, with a small toilet and wash stand.  The seat folded down into a bed, covering the toilet.  One had to stand in the hall while the attendant did this.  Then the passenger either made that quick trip to the washroom to change into his sleepwear or shut the door and do it while sitting on the bed.

The third bed was the one people generally think of…an enclosed “stateroom” with a full length bench seat which could probably hold three people.  About three feet across from this was a full-length counter with sink and washstand, a door to one side leading to the toilet.  Above the bench seat, the bed was tucked inside a locked compartment.  It contained a folding ladder and a webbing across the head of the bed to prevent the sleeper from being tossed out if the train made a sudden stop or a swift curve on the track.

In later trains, there was also a “smoking car”, complete with bar where people drank and—surprise!—smoked.  The dining car looked exactly like a dining room in a home, with a central table and many chairs, and a chandelier.  Trains having a dining car also had a separate kitchen car equipped with chefs.

 

The passageways leading from each car to the next were very narrow, with only room to walk single-file, and only about twenty-eight inches wide.  The metal platforms at the end of each car, connecting it to the next were barely two feet wide.  Remember all those scenes where some bigwig, accompanied by five or six people, stands on the caboose’s platform and make speeches to a crowd.  Couldn’t  happen.  And that confrontation between the hero and the villain in the same spot?  There certainly wouldn’t have been any fistfights in that tight space!

 

The engine part of the locomotive filled most of the space allotted the engineer and fireman.  To each side of the engine, there was a small seat about 12 inches square built into the wall where the fireman and the engineer sat, the engineer on the right, where he could grab the hand brake, if necessary, the fireman on the left where he could shovel in the coal.  There was a small walkway on the outside of the right side of the train, from the engine to the front of the train, a narrow catwalk on which to maneuver if one of the valves on the side of the locomotive needed adjusting while the train was in motion.

 

On the front of the train was the metal grill of the cowcatcher, not so much designed to catch anything but to knock out of the way any object on the tracks.

A steam engine could go as fast as 50 mph, and could travel 300 miles in one day.

Looking at Thomas “Doc” Durant’s luxurious car in the TV series, one envies him his drawing room, dining room, and built-in bathroom, as well as all the other features the common passenger of a steam train couldn’t afford.  Seeing something on TV or on the movie screen magnifies the size and gives an illusion of greater depth and width, but seeing the real thing shows exactly how much space those early train travelers didn’t have.

(Pictures:  Top:  Union Station exterior; Engine #X1243; 2 views of interior and waiting room of Terminal; Omaha Terminal poster;  "common" passenger seats; Pullman car; dining car; smoking car; statues by John Labja:  Sailor and Soldier, Sweethearts, the New Arrival, Reading the Train Schedules.) 

PL Parker joins the PFS

Posted by Mary Ricksen | 12:00 AM | 24 comments »


Today we welcome the talented author PL Parker. Is her new release, The Chalice, your secret dream?

“Bride Kidnapping” is the basis for my latest release, The Chalice.

In secret dreams, women imagine being taken by a handsome, dashing warrior who whisks them away to a life of passion and overwhelming love.  But in reality, being kidnapped by a desperate male isn't what romance authors make it up to be.  From a historical standpoint, women were considered highly valuable. They brought with them their tribe/clan's customs and new blood to add strength to the tribe.

“Bride kidnapping, also known as marriage by abduction or marriage by capture, is a practice throughout history and around the world in which a man abducts the woman he wishes to marry."

History is replete with tales of kidnapped women, their tribulations and quite often sad endings.  Laws were enacted to protect women from such a fate, but even today, bride kidnapping is alive and well in many countries throughout the world.  

The Chalice 

Blurb:

Decimated by the savage Deg’Nara and teetering on the brink of extinction, the last surviving males of the once great Chiagan-Se embark on a quest to salvage what is left of their civilization. They send their remaining seeker ships into the void, searching for genetically compatible females. Time is running out, but in the far reaches of the universe, on an obscure and primitive planet, a match is discovered.
One thousand panic-stricken women awaken two hundred years in the future, captives aboard an unmanned alien spacecraft bound for parts unknown! How had they gotten there and why?
The males thought they came willingly. The females believed they’d been kidnapped. Full of hopeful expectation, the Chiagan-Se prepare for the arrival of their new mates. Terrified and furious at the inexplicable abduction, the women prepare for combat! And when the two sides meet, the battle commences. 

 
Tegan’s breath hitched.  The door to the women’s quarters slid open, revealing a line of human females. Tense and uncertain, their very stance exuded uneasy wariness. Crowded together for protection, they stepped forward with studied caution and entered the communal area. As before, his Chalice appeared to lead the group, flanked by the giantess and the childlike female. Slightly behind, the dark one scowled with fierce determination, while beside her the calm one’s eyes searched the room, missing nothing. He nodded approval. Though nervous, they were nonetheless alert.
His Chalice bent down, patting the prone female’s shoulder, her soft voice murmuring unintelligible sounds rife with comfort. Long pale hair concealed her delicate features from his perusal stimulating his imagination to contrive her expressive eyes and sculpted lips. The female on the floor jerked upright and threw herself on his Chalice, her hysterical wails shattering the quiet.
“Should we go out there?” Shagal pranced from foot to foot, face alight with anticipation.
“Not yet. They need time to adjust to our presence—understand we’re not the enemy.”
“Why would they think that?” Shagal’s brow furrowed. “They were invited and they came. We’ve shown only kindness and welcome.” His silvery eyes flashed. “Unless you did something when you talked to them,” he added, lips drawn down.
“I did nothing.” His own excitement was hard to contain. He wanted nothing more than to enter the communal room and attempt to converse with his Chalice but now was not the time. He wished he knew more of their language, enough to tell her how pleased he was and how he hoped he could make her happy. Strange how he’d never worried about that in the past. In the before time, his Chalice would have been selected from the available females and they would have commenced their commitment to each other. If the Gods willed it, children would have blessed the union. He would have become regent with all the duties that title entailed and his Chalice would have ruled at his side. Now all he had to offer was his honor and his protection. Poor exchange for the life she could have had.
“She is too small,” Mordaq grumbled. “I told you she was.” The Warrior stared at the screen, gaze focused on the tiny Chalice. “Kormak did me no service.” His face changed, softened, avid interest flashed across his features. “Now there is a woman” he muttered.
In the center of the image screen, the giantess bent down and picked up a tray, strode to a table and sat down, seeming oblivious to anything or anyone. Tall and robust, tawny hair swept to the tips of her broad shoulders framing a strong but feminine face. His lips curved, a secret smile twisting his lips. The huge nourishment glands rose and fell with each inhalation. She picked up a utensil and began eating, strong white teeth peeking through her generous lips. Though she would not be his choice, Tegan could understand Mordaq’s attraction.
“Perhaps you could convince her breeder to trade.”
Mordaq whirled, astonished. “I would not treat either Chalice so unfairly,” he sputtered. “The tiny one was chosen for me. I could not dishonor her.”
“Perhaps she wasn’t made aware of that fact.” Vaux dropped down through an overhead escape hatch, landing with a soft thud. “I don’t think any of them were.”
Tegan studied the tech, noting the lines of concern webbing his drawn features. His heart skipped a beat. “What do you mean?”
The tech scratched his cheek, looking glum. “I’ve been going through more of Kormak’s logs, specifically the most recent, and I found something you need to see.”



Released March 30, 2012

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