Or what your eyes may see
The taste on your lips may lie.
Here things are not what they seem.
So you may speak your mind clearly
But must be warned that
We may not understand or
Yet choose to reply….The Others
Thanks!
November 8, 2012
Input Please
My son, Simon Nightingale, is updating my web site. On the Home page, I'll include a welcome, News of my current releases and this poem. I'd like your input on the poem. Is it good enough to be put on a web site? I'm not much of a poet but since most everything I write has a paranormal element, this sort of came to me.
Do not trust what your ears hear
Or what your eyes may see
The taste on your lips may lie.
Here things are not what they seem.
So you may speak your mind clearly
But must be warned that
We may not understand or
Yet choose to reply….The Others
Thanks!
Or what your eyes may see
The taste on your lips may lie.
Here things are not what they seem.
So you may speak your mind clearly
But must be warned that
We may not understand or
Yet choose to reply….The Others
Thanks!
10 comments:
I love it! Very intriguing. You are so good.
Thanks Autumn! I've been struggling with what to put on the Home page. Appreciate your input.
I like your poem. Use it!
Love it!
Good job, Linda.
I like your poem but was a little confused about The Others...Think it's a clever idea though
Should I put something to clarify that the "Others" are speaking? Any ideas? Thanks everyone for the comments!
I think people who come to the website for the first time need a reference as to who they are... It's a very cute idea
Linda, I like the poem. I would leave out the may before see. I think it will be perfect for your website.
Is the poem good enough? Most definitely, yes. It's beautiful.
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